Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: “A Wonderful Advertisement”. And you should write about 120 words. Remember to write it neatly.
【范文】
A Wonderful Advertisement
The most wonderful advertisement I have ever met is the one about Bright Milk.
The first reason lies in myself. I like animated① pictures very much. In that advertisement, there are a lot of healthy and strong cows which attract me at first sight②. They are personified③, lovely and vivid. Secondly, it uses a humorous way to expose the advantages of Bright Milk. After seeing the advertisement, we get the idea that the quality of milk depends on④ that of cows, and Bright cows are excellent in either health or intelligence⑤. Their weight even breaks the scales down and they are the first ones who work out⑥ the mathematic problem, which means that Bright milk can make you not only younger but also more intelligent. Such refined⑦ product can certainly attract your attention.
If an advertisement can do this, it is really successful and wonderful, because it can reach the ultimate⑧ aim of attracting people’s attention and arousing their interest in buying.
【注释】
①animated: 活的；有生命的；能动的
②at first sight: 第一眼
③personified: 拟人化的
④depends on: 依赖；取决于
⑤in either health or intelligence: 无论在康健方面还是在智力方面
⑥work out: 办理……
⑦refined: 净化的；提炼的
⑧ultimate: 终极的；末了的
【点评】
本文是一篇根据命题展开的议论文。这种题型在多种正规考试中都多次反复涌现。
全文共分三个自然段，作者采取归纳法阐述了A Wonderful Advertisement这个中央主题。
首先，作者开门见山，指出自己见过的最精良的广告便是光明牛奶的广告。接着，作者用了一大段的篇幅解释了自己持有这种想法的情由。在第二段的阐述中，作者采取The first reason, Secondly等表示逻辑关系的词语，使文章层次清楚，脉络分明，说理透彻。这几点也正是光明牛奶广告的最大特点和分歧凡响之处。而attract your attention又回应了主题，正是由于这样的广告能够吸引大家的把稳力，我才会特殊喜好它。第三段是一个对全文的大略的总结，既概括全文，又点明主题。
资料来源：李华田主编《四级写作》，新大学英语四、六级考点透视丛书/李华田主编，武汉大学出版社，2006
