作文话题与哀求：
Write at least 60 words according to the given topic“Computer games and our eyesight\"大众
学生作文：
Computer games and our eyesight
How do students like playing computer games inyour class?
Is it good or bad for eyesight if they spend muchtime in the computer room ? Why?
Would you give your kind advice to them?
Two-thirds of male students in our class like playing computer games very much .
Though ourteachers and their parents told them not to play games any more again and again .
I think it isbad for eyesight if they spend much time in the computer room .
Because I have someexperience by myself. I used to play them. Then I had to put on my glasses.
So I advise you. Give it up as soon as possible.
原文翻译：
How do students like playing computer games inyour class?
你们班学生玩电脑的情形是怎么样呢？
Is it good or bad for eyesight if they spend much time in the computer room ? Why?
如果他们花过多的韶光在电脑室，对视力是好还是不好呢？
Would you give your kind advice to them?
你会他们一些建议吗？
Two-thirds of male students in our class like playing computer games very much .
我们班三分之二的男同学非常喜好玩电脑游戏。
Though our teachers and their parents told them not to play games any more again and again .
只管我们老师和父母一次又一次的见告他们不要再玩游戏了。
I think it is bad for eyesight if they spend much time in the computer room .
我以为如果他们呆在电脑室太久会对他们的视力有影响的。
Because I have some experience by myself. I used to play them.
由于我已经从我自己的经历中得到一些履历了。我以前常常玩游戏。
Then I had to put on my glasses.
然后我就不得不戴眼镜了。
So I advise you.Give it up as soon as possible.
以是，我建议你尽快停滞这种做法。
作文鉴赏：
本篇文章的作者，能够从自身的角度去思考问题，认识到玩电脑游戏对自己的眼睛造成了严重的危害，并呼吁其他同学尽早放弃长期打游戏的不好习气。语句畅通，用词得当。
那么本篇文章为什么能够在家长的朋友圈疯传呢？
大概是也引起了很多家长们的共识吧？！
如果您是家长，怎么看待这篇作文有什么感想吗？
为什么小维当时没有这么高的觉悟呢？
以至于成了50米以外不分你我，
100米开外人畜不分......
眼睛是心灵的窗口，以是小维呼吁童鞋们，
一定要适度利用电脑、手机等电子设备，
避免造成近视，对今后的生活带来各种不便。
